Edits to the measurex tutorial (#534)

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### Suggested follow-up experiments
Try to run experiments in the following scenarios, and
check the output JSON to familiarize with what changes in
different error conditions.
check the output JSON to familiarize yourself with what
changes in different error conditions.
1. measurement that causes timeout
@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ Here are the commands I used for each proposed exercise:
4. go run -race ./internal/tutorial/measurex/chapter04 -address 104.154.89.105:443 -sni expire.badssl.com
To emulate the two last scenario, if you're on Linux, a
To emulate the last two scenarios, if you're on Linux, a
possibility is building Jafar with this command:
```
@ -243,5 +243,5 @@ Likewise, you can obtain a timeout using the
## Conclusion
We have seen how to measure TLS handshakes. We have seen how
this flow produces different output on different error conditions.
this flow produces a different output on different error conditions.

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@ -193,8 +193,8 @@ func main() {
// ### Suggested follow-up experiments
//
// Try to run experiments in the following scenarios, and
// check the output JSON to familiarize with what changes in
// different error conditions.
// check the output JSON to familiarize yourself with what
// changes in different error conditions.
//
// 1. measurement that causes timeout
//
@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ func main() {
//
// 4. go run -race ./internal/tutorial/measurex/chapter04 -address 104.154.89.105:443 -sni expire.badssl.com
//
// To emulate the two last scenario, if you're on Linux, a
// To emulate the last two scenarios, if you're on Linux, a
// possibility is building Jafar with this command:
//
// ```
@ -244,6 +244,6 @@ func main() {
// ## Conclusion
//
// We have seen how to measure TLS handshakes. We have seen how
// this flow produces different output on different error conditions.
// this flow produces a different output on different error conditions.
//
// -=-=- StopHere -=-=-